I loved this! You go girl:) Be strong and don't change for anybody. 5/5 from me:) Nicely written!

Hey I hope u get this when u said that it sounds like a song , look i see them as i write sometimes! :) good poem

Powerful stuff a really good write keep it up!

take care

wow, cool poem.. my favorite line was
"I will not change the path I've chosen
I changed too much for you
However, making that mistake again
Is something I won't do" it flows so well and i LOVE it cuz it is so true!! kudos to you!! great job
peace,
Abcede

you go girl! lol, great poem... lots of emotion

Brilliance. Simple brilliance.

wow that was very good

lotta love wendy

Um, nope J@DE, that is exactly what I meant to put.....

Wow - great poem. Really shows that even negative relationships can have some sort of a positive impact. If we take every bad relationship as an 'experience' it can only make us stronger. Then when we move on, we know what to look for. I love it - i think the message is graet - girl power all the way! 5/5 xxx

;o wow very well done hun, this really shows a lot of emotion and its VERY expressive!

Jaime jaime jaime, that was brillient. heart felt. i can't quite decide if i like the four or the fifth stanzer more, but they're both superb. but my favorite line was definately 'Haha, he's wrong, so forget it'. once again you had a good ending, and i like it for the same reason as the other one.
Brad
p.s. mine.......read.......please, lol