its not normal. and people dont accept it, not if they really care. but you have a way of getting a point accross. keep it up.

Good poem~ very interesting topic! ♥

ur rite its not rite....but there's nothing we can. cuz we cnt make any1 stop...cuz every1's narrowminded....and i knoe thts hypocritical but w/e cuz its true...if ppl are gonna slowly kill themselves.........we're just gonna have to accept it...and accept tht we cnt do anything abt it

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Christina

I love the way you express yourself in this poem and how you wriitien it built up with sooo mush emotions keep your head up and keep up the great writing.

Jennifer aka CRAZE

I'm speechless at the moment...
I completely agree with deep and meaningful message that you portrayed here. You wrote great piece, filled with sad truth.
I wonder the same things sometimes...
Truly good poem, original and powerful. This touched me in so many ways.
Keep up!
5/5 from me