Darkness Throughout All Enternally

by fred   May 27, 2005


My life is falling apart,
Piece by piece it goes.
I have nothing left to live for,
Apart from the friends which are moving away.
Life means utter sadness to me,
All I hold onto is a friend I love.
But how long will that last,
I wish love would last forever.
Many have broken my heart before,
Hopefully she wont be like them.
I believe she could be my one true love,
But I have said that before.
And that has broken my heart before,
But why would she say yes to me.
I know I’m ugly and most say I’m a freak,
I do believe I’m a nice person inside.
I hope she will make me happy,
But soon I shall find that out.
All I hope is that she doesn’t brake my heart,
Because in the end it will kill me.

By Fred Smith

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  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    Very nicely written. I loved it. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    wonderful poem. I liked it.
    please read my poems
    "pure love" & "life" IF you have the time.
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    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    If thes are your true feeling then you depend too much on what others think, I was like that but I learn with alot of hard knocks that to be happy with my selff is the first step in knowing what you want and where you wish to go. Life is a great adaventure don't shorten it because what others, grow a spine and life life for yourself not other. If you get time take a look at my featured poems. Thanx...

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