hey just wanted to say i luved ya poem! Keep up da awesome work! xoxo

very dark and vivid. I like the ending. Kinda like your blaming yourself. very well thought out. Great job on this. Keep up the good work.

Take Care,
Renee

I liked this poem, but instead of using "where" you should use "were". That sounds much better. Besides that, very good poem. xX

i like. 5