Though the lines are short, they still give the reader a mental image and it stirs something from within (or I'm just a lunatic). Either way, I enjoyed this greatly. :)

Hey i love this poem - written with great care and it's from your heart - love those type of poems :)

Wow...very powerful poem...It had me feeling everything you felt. xxx

The lines may be very short, but it leaves a powerful image. Seems like you really expressed yourself in this poem.
Beautiful

Very powerful poem! The poem was filled with emotion! Very well done! Take Care! Brooke~

very creative! i like it-like it! 25/5 =) again, you don't have to be honest with rating my poem 5/5 would do.. =) hihihihi