You

by cherry   May 27, 2005


Everyone expected us to happen
but no one expected this to happen

you dont know how much you meant to me
you just co0uldnt see

now i wish you where here
in my armsbut now i fear

that i will not be near
you to have whisper in my ear

i miss you and now i ask myself how i can live without you
without you i am nothing
just a something

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  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    This was a cool poem. It woulda been nicer if it was longer. But good job, showing this guy how much he means to you.

    Take Care,
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    First let me say WELCOME TO THE CLUB!!

    Now I'll say that I thought you could have kept going. To give details, ya know? But it was good.

    I'm not sure what you were trying to say at the end. You said you are nothing with out him but then you said just a something. It's one or the other. Pick one...lol. You could proof read this and find a couple mistakes.

    They'll be many more... (boys that is) Nice start cherry! Take Care....

    Hope you enjoy the club... :)

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