Wow, this is really really good.. very good job, keep up the great work.. i love it!

This poem seems to flow nicely in some places and the rhyming works well. From reading I feel that there is a lot of sentiment behind the words and that a lot of thought was put into their placing.

Keep writing,
Nici

flawles flow excellent rhythm and rhyme

Nicely done: you just get better and better. 5/5 =)

Hey.. great poem i really loved all the emotion! well sone mwa.. please chek out mine if ya can! XOXo stephy :)