thats good. 5/5 check out my poems please..and let me know what u think! keep it up

wow, very very good, it has alot of meaning, very well done, i feel the same to all the time. 5/5
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-Kit

Things get better as life goes on, I know how you feel tho, I went thru a reallly hard time when i was younger, so if u ever wanna talk, email me or my msn messenger is, realgirl_alltheway@hotmail.com
good job on this poem! 5/5 *KISSES*~Corrie