Kill Me Now

by Blckchrry   May 28, 2005


My mind is empty
what a waste
kill me now
i take up space
just dump my body off a bridge
you know I'll sink, cuz i can't swim
I'm going under
it's becoming cold
there's no more light
nothing to hold
can't feel my body
as i hit the bottom
it's nearing the end
it's almost over
nothing left to fear
my time is near
go to the light
and all will be right

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  • 20 years ago

    by MyMercy

    wow that poem was excellent...way to paint a picture for the reader...i could really understand what was happening...great job and keep it up, you've got real talent...check out mine if you can. it would mean alot to me.
    --emily

  • 20 years ago

    by Robert

    It seemed too short I think if you painted a better background to this or made us see a bigger picture then this it would have been alot better poem just a thought... If you get time please any of my featured work and comment and vote it would mean a great deal to me. Take care...

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