THAT'S A GREAT POEM....KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
LUVE LAURA

wow this poem is amazing! very good use of vocabulary! keep it up!i give it a 5/5
and check out mine...it would really mean alot
--emily

I LOVE THIS POEM! I simply adore it, dahling! Best one I've read in a LONG time! 5/5

You are extremely right, we humans tend to wall ourselves in our own sorrow. 'Tis sad.. Kudos =)

Yea i like this poem lots, I can relate lots to the poem so its makes it even better... keep up the good work

You are a fabulous poet. what an incredible piece! Great job, keep up the good work!

God Bless and Take Care.
Car

Great poem; really deep and meaningful. Good use of vocabulary as well. I've read many of your poems, they're all fantastic. If you have spare time, please look at some of my poems.

I liked it...

wow, i really admire this piece, really well structured and creativly writeen! Keep it up!
luv kt

awesome poem...keep it up...

-Maisha

hey that was really good! it reminds me of well..ME!! HAHA.. 5/5 keep up the good work

I fell in love with it! Great poem! You really DO have amazing talent. I like all of your poems ^_^

Very nice

Its like i wrote it myself. amazing! kinda scary sounds just like me

Really good poem i really liked. you have really good talent keep it up

Your poem is amazing, it gets right at the heart of what i am living right now, i wish there was some way i could let that person read this and understand what she's doing to me...im sorry for whatever happened to you that caused you to write that poem, its really good though

Its a good poem
nice composture
fairly elaborate
but needs a bit of livelihood

It gave e goosebumps....
amazin..but i wonder if its true?

OMG !!!! *** Thisss poemmm is sooo amazingggg omgggggg Good Jobbb 10/10 :D omggg seriouslyyy i lovee this poem it rocksss :D !!!! Good Job Again :)

This poems is truley amazing.
It really touched me and kinda sounded like
myself. I don't know if this is what you are going through right now or not, but it sounds just like what I am or was going through...
You're a good writer. Keep up the great work.

Check out some of mine if you have the time. I'd love to get some of your feedback.

Once again, Good job.
5/5 All the way.