Petals on the River

by Amber Dawn   May 29, 2005


I throw these petals in the river,
because my love for you has died.
There is no more.
As I watch the water guide these precious petals.
I remember how precious our love once was.
But we faded away.
and now the love we once had has died.
It's only a memory,
a sweet precious one.
The only memory I'll keep,
is watching the petals of dead love float away on the river.

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  • 17 years ago

    by stolen_lyfe

    Whoa hunnie holy crap I can't find the words to say how much this poem is making me feel i've felt like this, 2 yrs ago in fact the pain is slowly going away. I LOVE U!

    CARE

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    WWow i loved this it was so gentle yet so violent..i lvoe it amamzing..

    Lissa oxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    I'm feelin just the same way. Thanks so much for your comment. You could feel the sense of loss in your poem. Good stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet Aroma

    Sometimes it hurts to hold a memory of a love that has died. I can relate. I liked your poem

  • 18 years ago

    by AnorexicDream

    thanks for the comment i am glad that u liked my poem. great poem.

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