I'm speechless, very great twist at the end...I really love this one, you have so much talent!!! Wonder how you got the idea to write this one...hmm...

love sabrina

wow that poem was very confusing ...in a good way! you have great talent so keep writing because i love reading your work! also check out mine if you can and tell me what you think of them...it would mean a great deal to me...well i give it a 5/5 GREAT JOB!
--Emily

wow, that was a sad but well written poem. It was amazingly good writing, keep it up, 5/5!
~*lindz*~

WOW, creepy but good. Keep up the good work.

Jennifer aka CRAZE

I agree with confused & afraid. Great work. <3333

All i have to say is that Im just SPEECHLESS. At first I was confused but at the end I started to understand. Well I liked it as always. Youre very talented. Keep it up!

Very goooood keep it up

That's creepy lol im scared to go to sleep when my bf here now lol but its really good