i love this poem, it rox! i can relate to it....not the lookin in the mirror bit....the girl bit...yeah...l8r

Now this one was good, I liked what I saw.
The feeling and emotion, left me in awe.
I really liked how you'd start every line using those words, every time.
Okay, this was grand... now, this is good work. By the way, Im sorry for being a jerk.
But the Ripper was once a man I adored. He'd stalk through the night - ONLY KILLING wh0res.
But anyways getting a little off track heres a 5/5, be nice, comment back.

Good job on this one, keep writing!

The mirror part was a good idea. ur own describtion of what u feel n what u see in ur reflection. 4/5

That is sooo good.... i wrote something like it once, but a little different.... anyway, i love your writting.... its so... expressive... lots of love

~bekka baby

This poem is really good, there is always a time in life, where you just dont like what you see when you look into a mirror. you wonder why you are where you are at. and sometimes you wonder why you are so unhappy.

Stay strong.