i love it...excellent form and word choice. I love the emotion and the feel of longing in the last line...you're going on my favorites.

Another good one! lol Keep it up hun!
xoxoxoxo

Pushed aside like a mindless vermin.
God forbid, send me an omen.

I really liked that part. This was really dark, I read it right after one of your more "upbeat"poems so I had to read it a few times. Nice job on this.

damn another wow good one keep it up

Wow.....my hartbeat so fast when i read that niice intensity.

LIS