nice poem

Good poem i look forward to you other poems. Keep up the good work!

wow... really good

This was a well writen poem you I could almost see it and the message was clear great job.If you get time please look over any of my poems I would be greatful...

hey that was really a great poem i liked very detailed i would have loved it if it was a bit longer but this was a great piece.....

oh h3ll yeah, this poem kicks a $ $. great work. <3333

Great poem. I could just see that happening. Keep up the Great work

hi there my name is lindsey k. well i am only 13 years of age your poem makes so so so so so so much since to me well keep up the great work ROCK ON!!!!

sincerly,

lindsey k. becky drake's neice!!!

this is awesome!!!! 5/5

good poem, i really liked it
it flowed beautifully and was very well written
5/5

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