Very beautifully written yet so sad. I think this is one of my favorite poems of yours! Flowed very well! Keep it up! ~Brooke~

So well written! I loved it! It flowed so well! ~5/5~
Love always,
Haily
xoxoxoxo

Excellent poem! 5!

then one day the springtime rain
shall turn a crimson red
crimson rain from all my pain
from the blood and tears Ive shed

I love that part the best. This poem is excellent. Keep it up!

Love much,
Tiff

i really liked this one, its uniwue.
~Freak~

I LOVE IT!!! this is written with such passion and the imagery is great! i hope everything gets/is better. you are in my prayers!

alwayz,
*reality*

p.s. thanx for the comment on my poem...it meant a lot!

fantastic work.. really loved ur poem! mwaZ stephy :)

great poem!! i love it. 5/5

Hey, this is really good. I can feel the emotion i can relate i know the feeling. My favorite part was

I'll dance out in the crimson rain
my pain will then slowly seep
as I lay to rest in the crimson rain
no longer shall i weep

wow, that is awesome, keep it up

That is an awesome poem. I loved it. Good job.

yay! very nice. this was amazing. i like it alot.

This was a mediocre, I found some parts were well done, while other's were just a hit or miss. But good write I gave it three.

Whoa... really heavy.. but i love it... seriously... its awsum... keep up da gud work XD

Luv alwayz... *..KimiC..* XOXOX

another great poem! you are a very creative writer. keep them coming and thanx again for all the comments!