I think it's awesome, I'm 13 too. Thanx for commenting on my poem. I like the ending. Stay strong

xoxoRachel

it is good well done i aint very good either nd im 16!

wat?! it is good - its like brilliant. im 13 too and u rated my poem, so thanks. i hate my life sometimes and poetry helps. keep smiling and writing poems.

hey

omg ur only 13??? when i was 13 i sucked ... and taht was awesome ... i still suck today ahha well i guess im only 14 :P

Sad But Good 5.0! *Huggs* xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

people this poem is for this girl at school she is the one who inspired me to write this poem . thnx for rating.