Nice poem, good flow. Keep it up.

This is great! i like it.

Wow that was really good, It reminded me of my graduation lol. Anyway it's really good to read something different now - This poem is unique. Good job. I think the flow was smooth.

My favorite stanza.

Our lives are just beginning
And our fate is ours to choose
We can't control the obstacles
But it's our choice to win or lose

Keep writing!
Thanks for the comment.

5/5!