um, I did not quite get it... Im not used to this kind of poetry...

This style of poetry obviously works well for you, as the words seemed to flow nicley from one line to the next. Again I felt a lot of feeling had gone into its construction.

keep writing
Nici

Great job, it was deep and obviously thought through and meaningful. Your poetry requires some thought, just like people, you can't quite get all there is to know from their faces, you have to dig a little deeper, think through it. Great job!!
~laurel

Holy ****!! That sent chills throughout my whole body! Especially that last line. Oh god, that was FANTASTIC! It kind of reminded me of a song. Anyways, great poem!! I really enjoyed it! Please, keep writing!!

xoxoSierra

Truly and deeply brilliant, you have a wonderful way with words.

I didnt really understand, but peoms are the best when only you can understand them it means people dont try to analyse them and rip them to peices. Anyway great poem dude,