really good poem.. dont give up hope.
If a man doesnt notice you or doesnt care he isnt worth all this..
be strong,
great poem

love shell

hey thats an amazing poem ... i can relate to it ..... keep up the good work!!

~ Sarah ~

I know its so hard, but don't let a guy make you give up hope on life
and if he doesn't notice you then I know its impossible to see but hes not worth your pain
brilliant poem 5/5
love anna
xx

You managed to get your emotions across clearly in this poem, well done.
All is not lost, keep you head high!

Keep Writing
Nici

Good Poem Keep it up