excellent poem! i like it-like it! 25/5

This is a cool poem It gives you a picture in your head. If you guys have a chance please read some of my poems and get a chance to vote and comment.

Very meaningful...excellent structure. Lovely work.
That last line really stays with me...it really applies to my life right now...even if I'm taking it out of context...Well done.

Thank you so much for the comment.

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I liked the poem. Very short but very nicely done. It had a nice flow to it. By the way thank you for your comment. Your poems are very nice. You have talent.
~The Unforgiven