Comments : Is this how it's meant to be?

  • 18 years ago

    by Corrie

    That was excellent! I loved it, i loved the way that it went together, just everything about it was wonderful.. But I'm sorry that your having rough times, and just trust God hunny, and know that God loves you soo much, and He doesnt want you to hurt.. kepp your head up! I'll pray for you! 5/5 *KISSES*~Corrie

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    I understand...my dad is the same way...heartless... GREAT JOB Keep writting

    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    it was confusing at first, but in the end it all clicked. I sometimes feel the same way about my dad....great job portraying it.

  • 18 years ago

    by *~*Heart.Shaped.Rose~*~

    thank you all so much, it means a lot to me

    XXX

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    The third line seemed a buit out of place with it's length, but the rest of the poem flowed nicely. I can sense the anger and hurt in this poem. Ending with a question is a unigue way to finish.

    Keep Writing
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    You could feel all of your emotion as you read this poem! Great detail. I am sorry that this is happening to you! Very well written! Take Care! Brooke~