My Suicide

by Satine   Jun 2, 2005


I just don't know how much more of this I can take,
It seems as though fear clouds my eyes with every wake.
Depression, sorrow and anger fill my lifes ongoing strand,
If only I could change things and make my life feel grand.
This feeling, it haunts me, torturing my mind with its every strength,
It might just shorten my sanity's ongoing length.
So help me, someone, bring me back to life,
I want to have life greatest treasures without the painful strife.
This feeling fills my mind like a bottomless lake,
I just don't know how much more of this I can take.
Free me of the sorrow, free me of the anger,
Cast my life away if you must, but don't let it linger.
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I wrote that on a night I attempted suicide(which was a while ago, so don't get on me for it. -_-). I guess its just about how I felt..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Satine

    Thank you! <3

  • 18 years ago

    by brittany

    WOW i liked 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Satine

    Well if you ever want to talk, email me at frosted.oceanwaves@gmail.com

    That is, if you even get this comment. <3

  • 18 years ago

    by Life Is Beautiful

    great poem!! 5/5 from me...
    i'm a cutter, and i often think about suicide...i could really use your advise!!
    Lots of Love,
    Sarah