Cant you see?

by 6 A M   Jun 2, 2005


Can you see that I bleed?
Can you see that I die?
Can you see that I loved you?
Can you see that time go bye?

Cant you see that you did this?
Cant you see that your the cause?
Cant you see the pain?
Cant you see my flaws?

Why am I so beat?
Why am I so broken?
Why am I so dead?
Why is this my life token?

You did this to me
You did this to yourself
Now let me die

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  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Seemed to end a little short but very cool. The repetition was nice though sometimes I'm not a big fan on it. You used yours very well.
    ~FotF

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Its very dark but I like It Nice Job

    Much Love *~Jamie~*

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    once again dark but great. 5

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