Comments : First Kiss

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    wow... that was great. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica

    this is how my first kiss went you did a good job of expressing it

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Aww i luved this one its sooo sweet well done though
    great job take care mwa xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Erin

    Again really great. u have an awesome way of expressing how u feel. keep writin love poems u got somethin good

  • 18 years ago

    by Psychotic Heart

    You're so talented! That was amazing! No scratch that. All you're poems are amazing! You've so got my

  • 18 years ago

    by creeesta

    So sweet! *sigh* if there were only more guys like you in the world!! :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by he makes me pretty

    Aww was that about hobo?
    lol