wow...i don't know what to say....i'm speechless....so good.....i love it...true poem...true words....bye take care girl....hollaback girl...

loved the rhyming great poem

that was excellent

Hehe awesome poem my friend! The rhyming is really good and its just an amazing poem! Excellent work!
Keep it up:o)
Luv,
Shannon

man u have lots of long poems......that good......i like this one too......write more

I liked the rhyming also, it was a very sad poem, if you read between the lines, someone, has been really hurt...but there is Grace, by our Hevenly father....I'm going to read a few more of yours, I'll let you know what I think, if you could please do the same, I'd be honored...thanks love ya becky

hey, I loved this poem victoria.
it's so true. I agree with you.
you're really talented. it had a
wonderful flow. I loved it.
love you,
marjan

Wow, this is so true. Brilliant.

Regards,

Steve