Comments : Entwined

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    That the mist should clear
    And I could see you one more time
    I should look down from this mountain
    Knowing it was worth the climb

    --Loved those lines! Amazing job and I'm glad you steered clear from the usual rhymes and ideas of friendship.5/5

    Love, Heather.

  • 18 years ago

    by Willow

    I think this was a good poem about friendship. Great Job! oh, and I got Anxiety out. u can read it if u want to
    great job though :)