WOW! I love the line 'While the heavens pour angel tears' God that was so amazing, it bought a tear to my eye. What i would do for my boyfriend to be able to write poems like that for me, or even 1/10th as good as that. Well done *applauds*

This poem is beauty. It's the best love poem... I've ever read. The words are emotional, spiritual and brings a sense of familiarity and want for this love feeling.
I completely admire this stanza the most:
"Our lips,
Press together…
Smoothness of your skin, scratches
Against stubble,
The contrast of an angel,
And the man, the boy, dreaming to be more
When with a heavens icon.
And the thoughts echoes across,
I love her"
It was so beautiful yet at the same time gruff... it's like... the manliness of a man, becoming soft and vulnerable. Well, that's how I saw it.
A BEAUTIFUL and well written piece of poetry! Congradulate yourself, and take pride in this poem.

Great poem! I loved it and can't see anything wrong with it!! loved it! 5/5!

This poem has a unique flow, despite the fact that it lacks a rhyming scheme. I found it really great. there words you chose fitted perfectly, and everything about it was great.

Great poem...and that's honest as hell

*the words..

anyways, really good poem.

such imagery and beauty within it

As a nightwish fan i'd expected you'd like this poem :)

I love it.

this is an AWESOME poem great job. cant wait to read more of your work.

~!~Noelle~!~

this is an AWESOME poem great job. cant wait to read more of your work.

~!~Noelle~!~