deadly poem x) 5

Very nicely written... It seemed to flow very smoothly. Keep writing you have talent.. take care (always)) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

I thought this was really good. I have a poem of the same name. Check it out sometime. 5!

i really reallyy like this poem (rated a 5)

wow, i love this poem, keep doing what you're doing...

Great poem!! 5/5 you should check out my poem "the first time" thanks!! keep writing!!

XOXO
erinn

good use of words and i loved how you used an angel... it flowed beautifuly
great job

Your the first Poem I've read in this place and it is a VERY good first impression. Awsome, poor angle -_-

i really liked that. it was deep. good wording. i'd like to hear somemore.

amazing. Nice work. <3333

hey sweety just thought i'd write a line, that is a very interesting poem. i give it a five well maybe six hehe you are talented keep it up...love your string demon

april i absolutely love this poem keep up the good work! Love all your poems and you!
---Chelsey

excellent poem keeep it up

Thank you to all who have voted and commented it really means alot to me.
Love~ApRiL

wow. amazing. its so sweet, so sad.. and so great.
thnkx for the comment - im guna look at more of your stuff xxx

this is sad, dark, beautiful all at once. kinda like my poems.. but not as well versed lol. not yet anyways.

IT WAS ... .... *gasp*
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AWESOME,GREAT,WONDERFUL,MAGICAL,TRUTHFUL,THOUGHTFUL,HELPFUL AND UNDERSTANDABLE!

TREMENDOUSLY BEAUTIFUL WORK.

I liked this poem, Very good. it sounded kinda like one of mine there at the beginning. Keep up the good work.. 5/5

I'll tell you what i think. . . . .I think this poem is tormentingly beautiful. It hurt me to read something so beauitul. I love how broken this angel is and how remorseful she is. It shows that she still has a love for more than herself. Amazing capture. You're really talented. As i've told many before imagery is a very very hard thing to accomplish and tame but once you get it you have it and its great. You have it. Don't loose it.
Thanks :)
~*~Amber~*~