Wow, I loved the whole concept of it. A few spelling errors...upon* and divine* but the rest of the writing blocks it out. I don't mean to criticize because I really liked it. Take care.

~rolo

Cut Battered And Bruised
The Police Said She's Insane
As I Peered Upon Her Room
And The Rope From Which She Hanged
^^^^Suicide xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

I got it That's cool the way you wrote it from the eyes of the guy! Makes it different great work! ~Brooke~

I loved this poem. It was amazing. Excellent. Keep writing.

-Ice

wow that point of view was great, the picture you painted-detailed it was, the flow was good
YOU truly are a great writer

thats a great display of emotional suicide