WoW!!! nice poem. it seems like i need a rele long time to reach this perfect level of writing.

Plz read some of my poems coz i need some advices.

I don't understand the very last line, the one in its own stanza.. but it's still a very good poem! Excellent actually!

-Taylor

Your such a good writter girl, i love all your poems and how you right it..
*listen to this song i know its in a different language but i know ull love it.. "Unn Wenn Ein Lied" by Xavier Naidoo

Another great write, well done 5/5

Sounds like this guy put you through a lot...and im really sorry he did i know its hard when you love him to let him go but sometimes it whats best and you will find the guy who deserves your love anyway really good job : ) 5/5 <33