Comments : Out of Order

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Very cute and original. 5/5
    Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by NoPatience

    pretty good. not your best keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    This is a really good poem as well, hun.

    "When the wound is but a scab,
    Out of Nowhere, another stab."

    Those are my favorite lines. I really like the flow. Awesome job!! Keep it up! 5/5
    Love always,
    ~BJ~
    Also, if you ever need someone to talk to, I'm here, okay

  • 18 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Nice job, again. :) You're really good, I love your poems. 5/5