I love your writing. It is amazing. Not just this poem, but every masterpiece you've created is brilliant. You have a beautiful way with words.

i like this poem a lot you have a unique style and i love it. 5/5

A great poem, mate, but it suffers a little with the uneven form.

Don't try and change it, it works well, but in the future try re-reading your poem like you would a song before you post.

A poem that flows well reads better.

Again, a good effort and strong message.

B