hey that was a wicked good poem. i love it!
~Maggie

This was a great poem! I loved it. Keep writing! 5/5

-Ice

Nice poem!! 5/5, and very deep! loved it!!

Such a sad poem. I especially like the ending note you add to it. It adds the feeling you are expressing with so much vibrant color, you cannot help but feel it, too. Keep them coming;) Awesome job. Tata

Eden

oh, thats so sad, makes me wana be there for people so it'll neva get that bad.
You've put across all the emotion so well... n now I'm all sad!
I duno if this is about someone you know..
but i hope not.
but even so, it still happens...

anyway ... 5/5

keep it up

love Shell x