Seriously, I haven't read such a good poem in a long time! Wow. It's great to read a poem where life is described, and accurately at that. So many people think that life is all about pain and tears, yet this poem shows that there is so much more to live for. Life in itself is beautiful and extraordinary. I love the thinking you've done for this poem. I must say, this was a very nice write.

Dorotea

Wow brilliant! Very well done everything you wrote is so true. Your word choice was perfect as was the flow! You did an exellent job on this one! Take Care! Brooke~

Hey huni

wow a great poem you make so much sense .keep it up im sorri its short but i cant express how gd it is .keep it u p

it's so wonderful. I loved this poem.
wish you the best,
marjan

I really like this one! Quite inspirational! Great Job Timothy!

I really like this, I have read alot of sad poems but this is great it shows theres a point to live and your making that clear lol :D

I loved the flow :D

Aw, that was good. I agree with you whole heartly, live life to the fullest, or else you wont have another chance to try what you passed along. Good job Chap!

-Jennifer.

Cool Imagery, I Loved The Way You Used Your Words, Fluid Flow, Gracefuly Put, Spoke Alot Of Truth 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

I absolutely loved that...didn't think a poem could do anything to me..but this one has...you've changed my way of thinking at least for right now..so thanks x x x
PS: you're an awesome writer..