hey that was a very good poem i liked it although some of the rhymes were a bit forced i still liked it you have a unique kind of talent and try to keep it up i look forward to your writing.
take care
HS

Hey, I read your comment, so decided to check out your poems. It's great to know another twelve year old on the site! You can E-mail me at emmyxox@hotmail.com.
Keep writing,
~Emmy