I like phoenixes. they're my favorite creatures.

about the two comments you gave me on Mommy... (abortion), sure you can make a copy. I'd like to know if you're posting it on the net or outside the net, if I may :) my name's Kristi Hancock so that's all the copying needs, right? :) have fun, and thanks :) im glad you liked my poem. it means a lot to me.

Nicely done. Short, but to the point, I don't think the capitals on the last word help with the style of the poem, but the description is great.

Peace. [Sole]

I like it. esp these line:
silence is the surrounding world
easily it is broken by the cry of the PHOENIX

Is that except or especially???