Your kind of right Nada - thanks for your comments and feedback always welcome :o) Okay well to clarify (which I hoped I wouldn't have to do, this piece is actually quite emotional for me) I lost a daughter to miscarriage, and I wrote this poem for her her name would have been Eireni, by I thought Aireni has more essence, so people would read it how it would have been pronounced.

Oh Eirisa, I am so sorry for your loss. A beautiful write for a beautiful little girl lost.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

I didn't understand it either, until I read your comment..... aww, Eirisa, so sorry for your loss, hun. Stay strong and the poem was beautiful, hun. 5/5

<3 Heather

ps...i'm so upset, on both of your poems I said I was to give you a 5 and this darn thing won't let me vote...i'm sorry...well, it's a 5 in heart =P

<3 Heather.

Brilliant. Such an awesome tribute to her. I am terribly sorry for your misfortune, though.

Your imagery was very captivating. I think this is just the first of your poems I've read, so I hope I will find more!

~Ciao Lipton

"I lost a daughter to miscarriage", my heart just broke big titta!! OMG that was..I have no idea, now i am crying, I am so sorry Eirisa I know how badly you want a little girl and believe me, God will bring you one!! For the time being you have me until this beautiful angel comes!! I love you!!
~Chelsey~