It wasn't that long, but it was long enough. Sad, and you told the story well. You have great potential. Keep it up. 5/5

lol **tear** i no what u mean same thing w/ me n a guy i love n always will keep it up 5/5

WOW! VERY GOOD! NO EXCELLENT! How you picked out all the right words to ryme was incredible. Not too long ago I was writting a poem that was as long as that poem done twice. But the damn site logged me off and I lost the WHOLE thing. it was probably a little longer that this poem put together twice. It was pretty good 2. I had everthing checked and it was all set then it was gone....damn....I rreally liked it too...I just sent a commplant to them and I hope they fix it so I wont worry anymore....anyways VERY good job.
Good day.

Good description! GREAT POEM! 5/5

again, really great job! keep it up!
luv always,
Ashli

wow seriously ur an excellent writer and i actually started gettin tears durin that one cuz ive been through the same thing and even though me and him dont really talk theres still that piece of my heart missin and it really hurts, great poem i loved it

wow, wonderful job. you express your
feelings so wonderfully. I'm going to
put you in my favorites.
love you, Marjan

5 stars *****!! keep it up!

definately 5/5, loving it!

very very very good. this is a great poem. 5/5. ur a great writter.keep up the good wrk

guys suck i hate them... awesome poem.

awwww. this was so heartfelt. If it makes you feel any better I remember having feelings like this and I'm twice y our age! Don't worry the right guy will come around soon enough.

That was sooo sad....you really expressed your emotions in this poem and did a great job....it flowed beautifully...your an excellent writer! 5/5

Your poem is literally long
But it is really strong
Packed with emotions
Flows like motions

Love it dear poet :)

Tc
Fsams