Comments : The Nightmare That Came True...

  • 18 years ago

    by Runner

    im sorry that this poem isn't good but i just felt like writing a poem like this...i don't know why though....please tell me honestly of how you felt about it!!

    Christy

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    wow...tears are welling up in my eyes. That was incredbile. Is this true?

    Thanks for commenting on my poem it means so much. :-)

    Much Love,
    Jordan-Paige

  • 18 years ago

    by Runner

    No this poem isn't true...but one night i wished it was true..then i had a nightmare of it happening so i just felt like writing a poem of it.

    Christy

  • 18 years ago

    by Sassy

    Hey Christy, I thought your poem was really good. Its weird hwo you could think something then ahve a dream about it happens to me all the time. Well anyways I liked it keep it

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  • 18 years ago

    by xfAdInGxaWaYx

    that was amazing it took my breath away

  • 18 years ago

    by Runner

    Thanks for commenting on my poem!! Check out my other ones too!!

    Christy

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    omg girl that is great i really loved it...what do you mean its not good...i loved it. it was beautiful and sad at the same time...and it had a good flow. keep it up. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    This a great poem!

    -Taylor

    PS
    I'd love to help your friend.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mel

    Wow that like made me want to cry. there were a few parts that didnt flow greatly...but all the emotion and everything made up for it. great job.

    *i wud appreciate it if u kud check out my poems.*

    .:MEL:.

  • 18 years ago

    by shelby

    That is one of the sadest things i have ever read its making me cry:'( but i love it ur really good!!