I like your abstract ideas painted with the words like "drowning" and such...that's just my kind of poetry. :) Have you tried writing in a different rhyme scheme? Sometimes doing things like that brings out the best of your ability because it's like an exercise. Just some tips at growing as a writer, not that you aren't really good already. :)

hey Christina, this poem is wonderful.
and please don't cry. it makes me sad to see people crying. love, Marjan

this is a pretty good poem...keep writing

I used to cry in private too. You have to let out what is really bothering you or you will make yourself crazy. Don't be so hard on yourself your poem are full of emotion and that's what makes them good. Have confidence in your work! ~Brooke~

wow! i love this poem its amazing. keep up the great work 5/5

O this was amazing. I really hope you are okay...smile sometimes hun. Take care xxx

i like this one i remember being 13 its hard tryin to make sense of anythin esp when u hurt so much u feel like ur heart is gonna break x

Awsome ; i know how you feel
Keep It Up
~HazE