Comments : Chamber of Eternal Adoration

  • 15 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Excellent job. I love the title too. 5/5

    <3 Heather.

  • 15 years ago

    by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE

    This poem was really great...i loved it...i like your use of words..they are different and i like that...so keep up the good work

    ttyl
    Maddy

  • 15 years ago

    by Samantha Jayneee

    dark... but amazing.
    love it
    sam xxxxxxxx

  • 14 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Dark, sinister and perfectly twisted. Another poem that delves deep into the nightmare realm. I loved the unique viewpoint and the terribly sadistic narrative voice which oozes sinister splendor. Great stuff. Am I right in guessing this is vampire inspired? Or was that just how I read it? 5/5 x Awe inspiring read.