Excellent job. I love the title too. 5/5

<3 Heather.

This poem was really great...i loved it...i like your use of words..they are different and i like that...so keep up the good work

ttyl
Maddy

dark... but amazing.
love it
sam xxxxxxxx

Dark, sinister and perfectly twisted. Another poem that delves deep into the nightmare realm. I loved the unique viewpoint and the terribly sadistic narrative voice which oozes sinister splendor. Great stuff. Am I right in guessing this is vampire inspired? Or was that just how I read it? 5/5 x Awe inspiring read.