I liked this line:
"The Clouds Whispered The Rain"

Very beautiful, yet sad poem. I loved it and I could not draw my eyes away while I was reading it.

A well earned 5/5 for you! You write so beautifully.. Keep up the good work =)

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

Your poems are very interesting. nice work.

Wow, this is a very STRONG well-writen and touching poem, you did a fantasic job, i read atleast 4 of ur poems on here, and they're all meaningfull and touching, GREAT JOB. 5/5 Plz check out my poems, thanx.

I love it
the tone draws me into the story.

5/5

Gr8 poem...i like the ending. finly away from pain. it's a pretty poem:)

Now this poem is ABSLUETLY BREATH-TAKING! i mean it really rocks!! i luuved it! it had a deep meaning to it...
take care
luv,
haya 3gab =]

Beautiful poem ...... i could feel the emotion ..... well penned ..... 5/5

keep it the great writting

Chan
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Wow what a poem, the imagry combined with the hurt of abuse, very nicely done images were done perfect it was like I was there the entire time.

Great poem..i almost cryd..great imagery.. i could almost see everything as u wrote it!! 5/5

XoXsweetkissesXoX

Aw. that was so sad. i thought it was gonna be about a ocean and thats it but it relaly had a lot of meaning, you are a great writter