Lost souls

by BruisedxandxBroken   Jun 9, 2005


As the night falls
In her shadowy, sorrowful cloak
Darkness calls.
Hollow bodies with no emotion
Drowning on a wretched ocean,
Violently fading to nothing,
Sinking to obscurity,
Embracing the dark.
There is no purity.
No hope.
No love.
A sorrowful overcast
Pouring angel tears from the heavens above
Trapped in chains
In this dismal realm of lost souls
Hate and fear prevail
There is no life inside us
Our faces are far too pale
Our hearts far too black
Our life is the blood.
We are the angels of the dark
Elusive hearts that cannot love
Feeding with pain and blood
Tortured forms created by tears and shadows
Waiting for nothing
Always forlorn, always lost
A timeless agony and despair
Dust pairs with fear and dances in the air
Dead leaves vent their loneliness
Don’t look above
Forget the lies of hope and love
The only salvation is through us
Embrace the dark, embraces us
For there’s no other escape.
Eternally we’ll live
Eternally will kill.
This world is doomed.

this one is about the people that are so depressed that not only do they hurt themselves but they actually start takng thier anger out on the people that caused it rather than themselves

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    The wording you use is absolutely amazing. For your age, you write with a definate passion that can only be seen in one in every thousand writers. I'm really glad that you're in our critique club, it is great to have young talent there.

    I am most definately looking forward to reading more of your work. Nice job,

    Dorotea

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