this poem is amazing! it sent a shiver down my spine! i'm not sure if that was the intended effect, though! but, yeah, very good poem

thankyou so much lol that means alot that it moved someone enough to "send shivers down their spine". I apreciate the comment very much!

Amazing, it flowed so perfectly and the words fit so well.. Nicely done.. Keep writing and take care (always)) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Amazing, it flowed so perfectly and the words fit so well.. Nicely done.. Keep writing and take care (always)) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Very nicely done. I really liked it. <3

o my. that is amazing. the kinda oppisites worked wel... or the other method you used. wat ever it was... wow.
brill work. keep writing cos ur mega great. sam xxx

I LOVE THIS POEM!!!