Comments : Hopeless (NONET)

  • 18 years ago

    by Andreea

    I love it. Fits in very nicely. Thanx 4 the tip! Keep it up.

    Love, Angie

  • 18 years ago

    by M J U

    Whoa! I am totally impressed with this. What a great first attempt for you and still filled with hopless romantacism. You still are and always will be the best.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~ღ~ jeSSica ~ღ~

    wow, u know so many different styles of writing poetry.. this poem is so creative! i like it-like it! 25/5 =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Another great piece. You are truly talented. enjoyed. hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by toni rossetti

    cool

  • 18 years ago

    by Libby M

    A good one also.

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    "In the doorway of your selfish heart"
    I absolutely love that line! The entire piece is amazing, but that line is awesome! Definitely 5/5...Keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    Awesome job keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Love the poem, it's a nice nonet, i just learned how to make those not to long ago and at least for me i thought that they were kind of a challenge. you did a lovely job with the poem. i too also love the door way line like holly. and also to let you know the butterfly icon in your profile is also very beautiful!

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by keep n touch

    Nonets are the best type of poem. i love this, because unlike other nonets i've read, you can read it once and get everything, all the lines connect to each other. Very nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderfully done!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Anthony

    Awesome! I think i'll go write one of these myself! Awesome(I use this word too much but i mean it!!)

    ~Anthony

  • 18 years ago

    by Falling Up

    I love this... its short, but sweet, and contains alot of emotion.. you are good at putting alot of that, into such a short phrase... its also leaves you thinking... well keep up the good work!