I love it. Fits in very nicely. Thanx 4 the tip! Keep it up.

Love, Angie

Whoa! I am totally impressed with this. What a great first attempt for you and still filled with hopless romantacism. You still are and always will be the best.

wow, u know so many different styles of writing poetry.. this poem is so creative! i like it-like it! 25/5 =)

Another great piece. You are truly talented. enjoyed. hugs, love, Ann

cool

A good one also.

"In the doorway of your selfish heart"
I absolutely love that line! The entire piece is amazing, but that line is awesome! Definitely 5/5...Keep it up~Holly

Awesome job keep up the good work!

Love the poem, it's a nice nonet, i just learned how to make those not to long ago and at least for me i thought that they were kind of a challenge. you did a lovely job with the poem. i too also love the door way line like holly. and also to let you know the butterfly icon in your profile is also very beautiful!

~Jacklyn

Nonets are the best type of poem. i love this, because unlike other nonets i've read, you can read it once and get everything, all the lines connect to each other. Very nice

Wonderfully done!!!

Awesome! I think i'll go write one of these myself! Awesome(I use this word too much but i mean it!!)

~Anthony

I love this... its short, but sweet, and contains alot of emotion.. you are good at putting alot of that, into such a short phrase... its also leaves you thinking... well keep up the good work!