Very nicely written, i can almost feel the rain and setting through your vivid description. well done

Wow. Lovely job...your words are so powerful and paint the best picture....great job =) Mother Nature is a true beauty...and with just this...I agree even more....I love the rain....Well written hun. xxxxx <33

-Mortalidaga
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ps. I can't wait to read more! =)

Nice poem 5