"Wish for you not to see what is in my heart.
Portrayed in the simplest forms of art."

It's a good thing that you have something to vent with, but you might want to find a friend to talk to. Thats always helped me.
Take care,
Renee

Ok, It's really good! I really like! So, yeah great rhyming and amazing poem with a good story. I've done that myself...Smile when I really don't feel like smiling. Painting on my fakeness for all to see...

work a bit on it and it will be a master peice...i dont know whats wrong just dosnt go completly right....still it is a good poem
well done

I liked most of it, besides the last line in the last stanza.

you express your thoughts wonderfully
chad. 5/5
marjan

i can definitely relate to this one. great job w/the rhyming... :)

this one was expressive. not one of my favorites of yours. maybe it was the flow? I still thought it was very good as are all your poems.