I liked it; very expressive and heart-felt. I loved the last couple of lines....very powerful...

PLease read my poem "Pencil"? thanks much.

Wow, this poem is really deep, dark and full of emotion. Your rhymes are really good, and the story behind it is well written. Awesome! 5/5

i loved this poem, it had a lot of emotion and like no motiv? said it was very expressive. keep up the good work

Hey full of feeling and emotion. Luved it so much. You have a unique way of writing poems. I like all your work so keep writing more! :)

Full of emotions and obviously well thought out!

Keep Writing
Nici

wow...thats really....good....so sad...hopefull....5/5

i really like this poem. its different, but its good

loved the last few lines, good poem overall too. keep writing.

i love the last 2 stanzas...they're the ones that really reached out to me...nice job! great rhyming, beautiful flow! keep it up and i look forward to reading some more of your work!