Aww so sweet! I love dedications. I love your poem, it's brilliant! :)

I dont think that the expression of love could have been worded any better. Magic and enchantment, beauty and peace....you would rather have the one you love. Touching!

~*~Christina~*~

Beautiful write! I absolutely loved this! Nice flow and beautiful descriptions. The imagery was enough for me not to mention the emotion pouring out of it!

The only suggestion I would make..(You’re the author...it's your call)...would be to take away all the commas after each sentence. I think that can some times take away from the flow and they aren’t really necessary.

Very nice write!!

I lvoe this one so much! its probably one of my favorites by u! u have a lot of talent, so dont let others get u down, just keep going at wat u no best